Thursday, April 21, 2011

The Beginning

This is the start of a continuous project I will add here, I am really excited about this because it was a story I wrote long ago that I am re-writing and adding to. So here starts our journey!!


The Beginning
               “Two young lovers, who had never once touched, nor conversed. Although they knew each other well by stolen glances, they would ultimately find each other through turmoil and distraught circumstances.” A young mother of two had just said this to her children before the eldest, Elizabeth, asked for the whole story. Her mother replied, “Yes.” Then she began the whole story.
               “I will tell you about the characters first so that you will understand the story. First there is Ephrain Dicarlo, a blacksmith in the kingdom of Berble. Ephrain was a tall young man, with blazing blue eyes, and dark, shoulder length hair. Then there is Rowena Fwain, a beautiful, fair maiden, who was the oldest of her five brothers and sisters. Rowena had fiery, red hair, green eyes, and was a little taller than the average woman.
“Oh, she sounds gorgeous mother, is there love in this story?” Elizabeth interrupted once again. Her mother simply nodded her head up and down in a graceful manner.
“I hope there will be adventure as well.” William added, attempting to compete with his sister. His mother simply nodded her head once more before saying, “If you two do not stop, I will never be able to get to those parts.”
The children whispered their apologies under their breaths. The mother smiled. “Shall I continue then?” Both of the children nodded.
“Alright, well also in the kingdom, there was a sour king and his good son Sir Eric, who was in sword tournaments almost every day. People continuously challenged him, and he accepted because he knew he would always win. Kataleen Fuentes, another character in our story was an evil sorceress.”
               “The kingdom I am about to describe is very much like ours; then again it is not. The kingdom was shaped in a rectangular form, with the King’s castle in the center. There were small thatch-roofed inn, pub, vendors, and even homes, in various places. There was one church, which had a pond adjacent to it. A bridge went over the pond, so that the village people could get to church every Sunday. On the other side of the kingdom there was an area where Sir Eric’s tournaments were held. Outside the double guarded gates and past the mote were homes and there were farmhouses in small groups, where you could find beautiful meadows. And past that, well the mountain ranges were there. Now, that you know this, let’s begin our story before it gets too late.”
               Once upon a time, in a not so far away place, lived a blacksmith named Ephrain. He grew up with the blacksmith, Tony, because he did not know who or where his parents were. He was dropped off on the blacksmith’s doorstep when he was seven years old. He had no memory of his parents or what they looked like. In fact, he did not remember anything from his childhood up until he arrived at the blacksmith’s door. Except he could remember two things, a ship with white sail passing another ship with a purple sail, and his childhood friend Sir Eric, looking at him with his huge emerald eyes.
               Life as a blacksmith was fairly simple, as it was the 1204 year in our realm. His jobs were to make swords and deliver them, to whoever ordered them. Sometimes he got orders all the way from Kafe, which was a week’s journey on foot. Every other day, Ephrain would go about the same routine. He would wake up and cook first meal. Then he would go to the shop and heat the metal, mold it, and let it cool. He would then go and eat whatever was available for second meal. When he returned to the shop, he would reheat the metal, shape it, and sharpen it. After this long and tiring process he would go to Acott’s, to relax and hear town gossip. The following day he would deliver swords.

Monday, April 18, 2011

Finding Mr. Right

Needs work but I will continue editing this until its done.



Finding Mr. Right
I woke up to the text on my tiny white Samsung phone. "Goodmorning Beautiful" was all it said. It was from the man I had met the night before, as a spur of the moment, lets meet after we had been texting for a couple weeks. He was tall, had kind eyes, dark hair, and a mustache. My first thought when he walked in to the brightly colored music shop at the mall was “Oh my gosh, He is so tall.” There have only been three other men in my life that are taller than six foot four.
            After I got over my initial shock of his height, I shook his hand and said “Hello”. After a brief introduction of my two friends, who had come with me to meet this man, we all began looking through the DVDs that were on a rack in front of us. The DVDs were random and varied from Fragle Rock to The Hulk to Psych.
            Eventually it was suggested that we walk around the mall, my friends nudged me to walk next to him, while my face turned beet red. Nerves already fried I just did what they were trying to get me to do and he tried to start a conversation with me. But I wouldn’t talk to him. I don’t know what was wrong with me because I am not usually quiet. My friends decided it would be a good idea to leave me alone with him to wonder the 2 story mall.
            “I will get you to talk to me,” he said, as I giggled and continued to follow him. We walked along the second story of the mall and then down the escalator to the first floor. Many minutes passed with a conversational silence, as we continued to walking by many colorful shop windows, stores ranging from a Macy’s Christmas store to Victoria’s Secret this mall had everything.
            “Oh the Disney Store! I love Disney!” I said.
            We walked into the store and made a full circle around the store looking at the coffee cups, stuffed animals, and movies. We stopped when I noticed the little mermaid section. Picking up a Christmas tree ornament I noticed that my hands were uncontrollably shaking, I had not realized I was that nervous. On the drive to meet him I was steady, sang a few songs to the radio in my car, while my friend who sat in the back seat smoked and my other friend asked a few times if I was okay.
            “The little mermaid is my favorite princess,” I said.
He simply replied, “cool.”
The two friends who had left me alone earlier were in the store, ducking down behind the shelves, trying not to be seen. They wanted to check on me and make sure everything was going well, I had no idea they were there and neither did he.
The man and I continued our walk around the mall, going into Hot Topic, and a Sports Fan shop. We joked about Florida and UGA, since he loves one and I love the other. The great rivalry begins, screaming at games while watching my little brother on the field would be fun with this man I might start dating.
While we joked and laughed and flirted, I began realizing that there was defiantly something there, like a spark, some potential that this could, would, work out. I knew it was too early to tell what would happen, but I began to hope. It’s just about time for Mr. Right to show up in my life.
After we were done looking around in the Sports Fan, we sat down on a bench just outside of the store. I could only think of what my friends would ask after tonight. They texted me asking if I was okay, if I wanted more time with him, I replied yes I was fine, more time would be nice.
He showed me his Droid smart phone and the hundreds of songs he had on it. We discussed music and found out that we both enjoyed many different genres. Handing me his phone so I could look through the music, I accidently moved my index finger down the screen way to fast and it caused the phone to scroll down to some random song I had never heard before.
He had mentioned earlier in the day, when we were still just discussing the possibility of meeting, that if we did he would have to leave at nine pm. Nine pm came and I asked if he needed to leave, he said he did not and asked if I needed to. Where else would I rather be than sitting on that bench with a very handsome man who was flirting with me?
Fifteen minutes later we had to say goodbye, the gates were closing on most of the store fronts around us, as we walked to the entrance of the mall we stole the last few glances, hugged, said goodbye, and he rubbed my shoulder while telling me he would text me when he got home.
I walked outside where my friends were waiting and was bombarded with the question, “So did you kiss him?”

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Extras

These are just little bits of something that I have come up with, not sure what will happen with it but I need to put it somewhere, so for today this is going to be my creative work.

how she fell for his wit, his charm, his glamor. She would never know that he did not appreciate such clever humor as she longed for. When would the lines fit together, when would they two become so enthralled together?

My friend once said this in a im, I decided to ask if I could still it, so with permission here it is.

It was dark -in a crime filled city - cold, and there have been stray dogs that have hung around the campus. I didn't take my time

Tuesday, April 12, 2011

To just get up and leave...

To just get up and leave you would be that one thing in my life... the most difficult choice. Who to leave? Weighing the pros and cons of the multidimensional relationship that now is. If I don't get out now, will I just be stuck here like her? How would you ever forgive me? I have the horrible feeling that you won't, because of the expression on your face. Where will I go, who will I be without you? Oh to be free of the worries and stress. But why, how can I do this? After reading, watching, listening to love stories, is this how it ends? Is this what is to become of us? Meaningless passion and deprived emotions? The once mentioned "you are everything" were priceless words, now lost to the wind. I do miss them but I will move on one way or another. Like that old poem  "Two roads diverged in a wood" Should I take the one less traveled by? Should I make the easy choice or the difficult one for the sake of it all?
Well here goes everything, what ever it takes I will stand by this decision, to just get up and leave.

Thursday, April 7, 2011

The Spring Fling

This poem hit me on my way to checking my mail box today, in passing several couples that looked twitterpated, completely infatuated with each other, like they were the only two on the side walk. I do love to see couples like this, but sometimes I wonder about the relationship there and when they may have met. Emotions come and go, many girls expect the relationship to become more, but is that really fair to that other person. What if what we need, what they need is just a companion, not a long lasting love but just someone there for this time in their lives. (No this is not what I am doing in my life, I am speaking completely from a writer's point of view and what I have noticed. As I shall probably explain on my non-cw blog) So here is my poem that I randomly came up with today, I know it needs a lot of work and may strike up some questions.


To meet someone 
to want to be with them that instant on impulse 
it is spring and maybe its not love in the air, 
something else, a need, a longing 
definantly something is floating on the the breeze 
that comes just before summer. 

They say we should love and live and just go with the feeling. 
If we do that these emotions may not last
it will be just a fling
what if I want more
what if what I long after is forever
just to feel "right" around someone. 
He will never feel the same
or at least not the same moment that I feel this way.

So we will just learn to expect nothing, 
after the moment passes
just to go on with our lives
as if nothing happened out of the ordinary. 

Wednesday, April 6, 2011

The start of something new...

Hello Again Bloggers!!
I have decided to begin a creative writing blog to showcase some of my work, and to have a place to just let the creative thoughts go. So to start off with I guess I will post a few poems for today.



Unexpected moments
 My chest feels it will explode
any minute.
Maybe it is panic, maybe it is something more.
Rushing flashes of light fill the air
around me as I gaze upwards.
That is the only way I can look, I can’t move my neck at all.
The weird green and pink colors fly around.
Strange tubes are forced into my body.
Shouts of “Move, he’s coding” fill the air above me.
What does that mean?
The random faces try to reassure me with crinkles of sincerity around the eyes.
Where am I?


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Next time you’ll notice the zombies walking all around campus.
Earbuds in, not paying much attention to people or cars around them.
Completely zoned out.
Occasionally they take a look at their phones,
Checking the time or texting,
That’s when you know.
As they cross in front of traffic or pass in front of bikes,
Almost as if they are looking for a near death experience today.